2nd peer feedback

Today I showed my 3rd Rough Cut to my class and asked for feedback, each person wrote out a selection of feedback notes and gave them to me, I then noted them down into further notes

Although the feedback was appreciated, I have selectively not taken on board a lot of it, especially the parts of where some of my class have not understood narrative, as these people would not classify as my target audience, where as the members of my class who would fall partially in my target audience have enjoyed and appreciates the narrative, calling it an interesting concept. I plan on heading forward in my work, as you can't please everyone in the world.